Hi, I am new to writing lyrics, and would appreciate some feedback on whether they are any good.
The lyrics are:
Verse 1
Once more my lover and you said oh baby,
Once more we're bridging too far,
I thought that loving was easy baby,
Keep my feelings locked in a jar.
Coming again and I'm easy baby,
Coming again and I'm done,
Pulling it out and slipping it off,
Forget what it was I came from.
Verse 2
Face leaving traces of shadows in darkness,
Feelings I had left behind,
Moving to make it I shift it and shake it,
Get myself hung up on a bind.
Pulling together is pulling apart,
These feelings I had from the start,
Getting along is getting us nowhere,
I sit and wait alone in the dark.
Many thanks for any comments.
The lyrics are:
Verse 1
Once more my lover and you said oh baby,
Once more we're bridging too far,
I thought that loving was easy baby,
Keep my feelings locked in a jar.
Coming again and I'm easy baby,
Coming again and I'm done,
Pulling it out and slipping it off,
Forget what it was I came from.
Verse 2
Face leaving traces of shadows in darkness,
Feelings I had left behind,
Moving to make it I shift it and shake it,
Get myself hung up on a bind.
Pulling together is pulling apart,
These feelings I had from the start,
Getting along is getting us nowhere,
I sit and wait alone in the dark.
Many thanks for any comments.
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